Stoner the cliff.

Stoner the cliff this week for our writing follow up we got to pick a character and write negative or positive things about our character. I chose to do mine on a cliff named stoner, here is our question for the week,  confidently shape ideas for effect. Now you know what my question is, here is my follow up. The cliff is named stoner. The stoner is really dim and dry. Know one likes him because he is fat and obese, his teeth looks like the wheels of a tractor. He has no family, they probably left him because he is more annoying than the sound of a lawn mower.  The reason he has no friends is because he flattens them like a really big digger. Because he tries to hug them but then he crushes them with his big rock belly. But on the positive side he still loves himself even knowing his life is like the bottom of a garbage can.  do you like my story?

5 senses 

This week for reading we had to read a book of our choice in the collection of books that we're given out. or question for this week is Visualize using all of the senses, and talk about how this enriches meaning. We had to do our follow up on what senses we could find in our book that we read. Here is my follow up for this week.

here is just one of my senses I found in my book.

what senses do you use in your everyday life?

reading follow up.

this week for reading I had to tell my connections of the book I read I read the fight.

have you ever been in a fight?

writing follow up

this week for writing I write a diamante poem here it is.

do you have a dog?

maths follow up

this week for math I did a scatter graph here it is.

what do you think of it?

reading follow up.

writing follow up

This week for reading we had to write a short story on a topic we would like. I did mine on a giant monster, here it is.

Down deep
It was a lovely morning in Hollywood. The bright sun was shining across the green hills, and the mercy blue sea. Suddenly the ground rumbled like my tummy at dinner time on a hard day at school. Then my phone went off,” hi Stan” said Angus “. did you feel that  earthquake”he said, of course I did. Everyone just thought that it was a friendly earthquake but not me. I thought that it was something big that was going to happen. As the day went on, so did the earthquake they just kept getting bigger and bigger, I knew that  something fishy was going on and I was right.

Destructively a giant man eating creature from the deep leeps out of the sea, the giant man eating creature obliterating everything in its path feeding of everyone’s fear, we all knew that one of us had to do something and that person was going to be me the first thing that comes to my mind is that volcano in the distance. The thing I had to do was get that big thing attention, a good thing that I know some people have in mind. A few minutes past and I saw them in the distance, I’m going to be a hero I thought.

They had these huge rocket launchers  that could blow up a hole town, they shot the huge monster looking thing, and of course that did it it now following me in my ford truck I was going about one hundred miles an hour and so was that monster looking thing I was almost at the volcano and bam I was flying through the air it was a glorious moment in my side mirrors I could see the monster looking thing burning to death in the volcano. Everyone asked me what we were going to do next and I said rebuild.