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Friday, 5 March 2021

Writing T1 W5

Writing T1 W5 

 this week for writing we have write  2 paragraphs about a story we read, so here it is 

Writing T1 W5

Main Idea 1

The text that I read this week was about the moari pa wars and what they used as there defence, what they used as there defensive back then to defend themselves was there nature around them to blend in so there enemies couldn’t see them that well also as an example like they built there defence and their base so they couldn’t get to it easily they put it in the piece of land that was surrounded by a massive river so they couldn’t get to it.


Main idea 2 

What did a pa include, Pa can mean moari village or defensive settlement and it often has hills, forts, fortified settlement, defence terraces and also can has fortified villages. That is what I have learned after reading the book from this week.  

Do you agree with me?

1 comment:

  1. good job Archie,just make sure you click ctrl shift V so it doesn't go off the page.

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