Hansel and Gretel

Hansel and Gretel

Hello and welcome to another blog about Hansel and Gretel and here is my question for this week,Use a range of written features to engage the audience. support ideas with detail(use an adverb to show how) here is my follow up for this week.

1. Cruel 

2. Dangerous 

3. Savage 

4. Furious 

5. violent

6. Terrorising 

7. Monsterace 

8. Brutal 

9. disturbed 

10. Rough 

Day 1 

The forest was as dark and gloomyWalking through it was like me in my deepest nightmare. 

The leaves were dark charcoal, The branches were as sharp as knives. The strawberry scent lingered across the forest; it flew under Hansel and Gretel's nose. The tree stumps were harder than bones. Day 2  Suddenly the distance was a clearing, there was a house. The house was sugar filled to the brim, the door was encrusted with lollies and sweets The chimney had marshmallow smoke flowing out of it. The gingerbread looked chewy, delightful and most of all it looked sweet. But they knew that if they licked their drooling tongue on the sweet candy there might be  consequences but the sour scent loured their heartwarmed souls. But Gretal said that “i'm going to go eat that yum, sour sweet crunchy lollies” Hansel said that “no it is wrong we should go home im getting scared” But in her mind she really wanted to eat those sweets. 

Day 2 

Sweet 

Sugar filled 

Salty 

Crunchy 

Chewy 

Devine 

Sour 

Frightened 

Do u like my similes?