Learning Intention | How can we use our knowledge of narrative writing to construct a text from a prompt. |
Prompt: | |
Plan | Where the setting is going to be Barli. 2 examples of a complex sentence The sun was brighter than a flashlight, and hotter than a fire. The sun is hotter than the inside of my black car, after a hot day. 2 examples simple sentence The sand was burning. The air was steaming hot. The sky is bright blue. 2 compound sentences The boat was in flames yet they did nothing, and jumped off and went for a swim. I ran along the hot sand yet I still kept running and fell over onto a giant sand castle. When I was sprinting along the hot sand until a giant dog leapt onto me, I tumbled to the ground. |
Beginning (Orientation - Setting/ Characters - hint to the problem | Paragraph 1: The sun was brighter than a flashlight, and hotter than a fire. The sun is hotter than the inside of my black car, after a hot day. The sand was burning. The air was steaming hot. The sky was bright blue. I saw in the distance a boat was in flames yet they did nothing,and jumped off and went for a swim. I ran along the hot sand yet I still kept running and fell over onto a giant sand castle. When I was sprinting along the hot sand until a giant dog leapt onto me, I tumbled to the ground. |
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