Amazing Archie
89 party place
Chingis town
(021) 398 782
tiktok@gmail.com
23rd of march 2019
Dear Mrs Earl
370 ines road
St Francis of Asisi school
Dear Mrs Earl
The school needs a pool because what if it was like 30 degrees and we are sweating heaps. If the school got a pool we wouldn’t have to go to QE2 for swimming lessons we could just do them at school. If we get a school pool it will be amazing, plus even out of school you will be able. I think that the pool could help the people that do surf life saving they could practice helping people.
Also we would save money for all of the busses we have to go on, and wouldn’t have to pay for all of the lessons. The last thing I’ll talk about is that the pool doesn’t have to be big we can just time table everything so everyone will get a turn in the pool.
Yours sincerely
Archie
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